Thursday, May 2, 2013

"Our Basement" Outline: Subjective essay.

Introduction:

Thesis: It has been and always be my favorite part of our house.

Paragraph 1:

TS:  It didn't always look the way it is now.
SP: It used to have white walls.
SP: storeroom.
SP: toys and TV.
SP: the spacious side.

Paragraph 2:

TS: When our parents tried to make it into a library, we started to avoid it.
SP: a wall was built.
SP: our toys were stored and removed.
SP: our TV was moved.
SP:it didn't feel the same

Paragraph 3:

TS: We decided its time to renovate the basement and make it grow like we did.
SP: we took down the wall.
SP: we painted the walls red and beige.
SP: had a wall of mirrors.
SP: we had a TV and couch.

Conclusion:

TS: The basement has always been a part of my childhood, and now its becoming a part of my daily life.
SP: me and my sisters draw and sketch.
SP: we have our family movie night almost every week.
SP: we have our friends over.
SP: just like we were kids. 

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